i rote this 2 years bak..here goes..
Natasha Johns had almost everything she wanted. Beauty, a rich family, intelligence and good friends. The only thing she wanted more was a boyfriend. Not just a boyfriend, but a certain handsome, athletic, blonde guy named Nathaniel Radcliff, also known as Nathan in short. Too bad he was already occupied by her friend Emily Fowler who did not know about her attraction.
Natasha was getting ready to go to a picnic, to an uninhabited island. She packed her bag with the necessary stuff she would need; sun block, bathing suits and sporty clothes. As Lila Robbins and Natasha had planned to go together to fetch Emily and Brad Fowler, Natasha drove to Lila’s house. All of them were going on the picnic with two other guys.
Her auburn, silky, shoulder length, straight hair was held lose. Her big green eyes were focused on the road, thinking of nothing, but driving. She liked to drive with rock music on, really loud; somehow it made her concentrate more.
“Hey Ash, so what do you think about going to an outing with your major crush Nathan?” Lila started conversation with her favorite topic. She had been Ash’s best friend since kindergarten. “Oh! You again. Don’t you know any other topics to chat about?” Ash said with a groan. “Anyways, he’s someone else’s property”.
“Like, why don’t you talk about Tom?” Ash suggested with a smile. “Speaking of him...why aren’t you going with Tom and coming with me instead? Anything wrong Li?” “Oh no! It’s just that he thinks I take too much time getting ready. Nothing’s wrong. No way, Ash. I would have told you before. After all we’re ‘the couple from heaven’” she said her eyes wide with astonishment. Then she wondered what would happen if something terrible like that happen in reality. No way. Only death will do us apart, Lila thought with hope. Only she did not know how far or near her death is!
Finally, they reached Brad and Em’s home. They heard someone crying out loud. Slowly, they realized that it was a girl and after a while they were certain that it was Emily as they recognized her voice. They sprinted inside the Fowler’s home, impatient to know what was so wrong that made Em cry so loud. Em was sitting on the floor, her curly, brown hair all over her face, crying her eyes out. Her face was as pale as death.
“Oh my God! What happened Em?” Ash was really worried. “I’ll call Tom and Nathan” Lila volunteered. Once again, Ash repeated her question to Em.
Em took a long, deep breath “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh” she screamed. “Br…Brad…Blood…Kitchen” Em pointed a finger toward the kitchen without being able to talk. Lila came back after calling the boys and they both hurried into the kitchen, leaving Em alone in the living area.
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thats nice stuff.. great e-englis-h
read gud stuf.
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ooooooooooooohhhh...................waiting for the continuation.
hope to read the complete story soooon
ok pumpkin
sounds interesting...
the rest of the comment, " to be continued..".....
Coool... I remember u writin it... hehe ;)
nice piece of writing bt i dont have the habit of waiting
who wants da next part?
mee wont the next part.
koba tha next part wiatingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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